Saturday, February 27, 2010

Bootcamp SF

BootcampSF_2010_2_25

2 comments:

  1. I love the feel of these cadences, but would change the line in the 2nd one that reads:
    Just wanna see the shower, and no ones balls.
    to:
    Want to hit the shower, without a bunch of balls.

    That way it feels more even (iambic)

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  2. Nice work, Jordan. What's the length for these spots? -Jon

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