Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Marissa's Bootcamp SF Spots

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  1. 315.01 Writing & Producing RadioMarch 3, 2010 at 12:47 PM

    Marissa, love the dialogue. Nice work. One overall comment is that the play-by-play announcers should be the same across all three spots so the campaign hangs together as a unified three part series. Same announcers should read the script from beginning to end. Tie-in the BootcampSF messaging at the end into their dialogue so it's seemless. No need to have a separate announcer until the very last line that gives the site URL.

    For example:

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    Sports Anncr 1: Times like these you should be glad there's BootCampSF, Ed. No sweat to worry about but your own. The wind in your face. And the only waiting you'll do is for your heart rate to decrease.

    Anncr: Go to bootcampsf.com and get out today.

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    Now let's talk about casting:

    Below are some voices that i think would be good:

    HIGH PITCHED EXCITED
    MXC (Most Extreme Elimination)
    http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=5214388990912034244#

    BRITISH VOICES
    Paul Sherwin & Phil Liggett
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgTsbI6f768
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qh6TB_d6eyo

    RELAXED/DRY AUTHORITATIVE VOICES
    Mike Krukow & Duane Kuiper
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lt7-Kjw01ck

    I'll elaborate more on this in class.

    -Jon

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